Photo&Story by Niyi Tabiti
if you are very much in town,you would have read about the plan of Mamuzee,the popular twins (who are into music) from the South-south of Nigeria,to get married to this beautiful chics who are also twins from the same womb.We gathered that the whole thing packed off after family members of the babes discourage them from such thing.While some regard it as an abomination,others describe it as dirty.It got to a time they could not manage the huge publicity that was coming from media reports on the issue.
http://www.niyitabiti.blogspot.com/ met the babes yesterday in Lagos and they disclosed that there is no going back on their decision to close their relationship with the Mamuzee twins.While they would not agree with the insinuation that it would have amounted to a 'dirty'marital experience due to African conceptions,they said they were not happy about the way media reports were flying from different places.THey also said that their grand mother was particularly said about the whole development of twins from the same womb getting married to themselves.
The beautiful twins just came back from a short vacation in Ghana. "Our brothers school in Accra and we hd to go visit them with our father" they disclosed
Abeg, try write well now, I don't understand anything of what you have just written. Who is marrying who?
ReplyDeleteI dont have a clue either. Please try editing your stories before posting. It has to make sense to you first...or try recruiting a proofreader.
ReplyDeleteLOL@anononymouses...thats why Niyi needs internet connection at home, lmao...
ReplyDeleteErmm im lost too, as per incest kinda runs?? *runs to google*
i heared the story too and i think it is a bad thing for twins to be getting married to themselves in africa.it is wrong and i mean it...it is wrong.
ReplyDeletethere is no gainsaying that someone is just out to pull down this network of information...imagine the comment following themselves and how much people can pull things down.I think the the first three comment are by people who are well known to u and they don't want to give a chance.Niyi,anyone who reads the twins story would get the drift except the person is a fool.don't be shaken,if it is only one person that is a true fan then you have defeated your detractors.It is not all about you,it is about the story,niyi u are mine.
ReplyDeleteMy God!!! some peeps are kinda clueless, I dont know who this blogger is I only found the link on one of the picture on bellanaijas blog, I reside in England.
ReplyDeletePlease try and take to correction irrespective of where u r blogging u have to proofread and ur stories need to make sense.
My colleague and I read and the story didnt make sense to us. uite a lot of spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.
Its such a Nigerian thing to attack. Please take to correction.
@anonymous 1:29: The first three comments are totally right. Let me be specific here, there are a few basic details that this guy just needs to work on. The biggest problem is his use of punctuation marks.
ReplyDeleteHere are two simple things he needs to take notice of.
1. There should ALWAYS be a space after "commas" and "fullstops".
2. After "fullstops", please start the next sentence with a capital letter.
I suggest you read about punctuation marks and their use from a basic grammer book or the internet. You can also improve by reading more books.
Also, always remember that it is better to write clear simple sentences than long complicated ones that make no sense.
Good luck!
niyi keep up the good work. you took the big step by starting a blog. if the critics are so sure of their puntuations and full stops they should start their own blog. they are taking this blogs thing serious. am your number 1 fan
ReplyDeleteWe are not the ones taking this blog thing serious. Most people do not use their blogs for the purpose of making money. Niyi, on the other hand uses this as a business venture which is very good because he has realised that there is a market out there. I congratulate him for the vision, there is nothing wrong there.
ReplyDeleteHaving said that, if he wants people to put adverts and sponsor this site like it is his intention, he needs to write better. Niyi, listen to the advice being given, you need to improve on your writing and please proof read your material. It is full of errors and jargons that nobody can understand. Do away with the "flattery naija tabloid" language. Abeg, step up your game, jare, I wish you well, my brother.
i dont understand. y is it incest if two brothers decide 2 marry two sisters. Africa and their backwardness.abeg the girls should fly away jare. who gives a toss about them.
ReplyDeleteI just like the photo. They kind of look like Sasha or are they related?
ReplyDelete@ Anon, January 19, 2008 2:53 PM
ReplyDeleteit's so obvious you are Niyi himself. Now do us all a favor by making the story intelligible.
LOL. this comments are funny esp the one before me. LMAO!!!!LOL. p.s THEY Do look like SASHA. crazy..
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